comment on style/ language

There are several points to note when considering the use of language in Serafina and the Black Cloak. First, the language of the narrative employs a rather rich use of vocabulary used to create the ominous tone of the story. While it may be sophisticated for some middle-grade readers of the book, it is appropriately challenging for such readers. Second, as this is historical fiction, there are several era-specific terms that serve to educate the reader. For example, Serafina’s father has to fix the dynamo, the first electrical generator. The narration uses terms such as “footman” which are not in use so much today.